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Synopsis: In this chapter, Rayne and Jack have a terrible fight and they split, but Jack, despite the congratulations he receives from his mirror self, discovers what is really important and comes to make a very important decision.

This chapter took me longer than it should have, considering that I wrote most if it in one sitting and the rest in another one nearly weeks apart. This chapter is really important to me because it's approaching the most important, most pivotal and most emotionally heightened chapter of the book, a chapter you will not want to miss for you life. It would be like missing the toll-booth scene in The Godfather. I'm still not sure whether or not it's written the way I want it, or contains the things I want it to, but I believe so. If it's confusing, good. Some of it should be. :) But, I hope you can enjoy it, I beg of you to favorite it and please, please, please, please leave a comment before you go. And if it's not too much trouble, please pass it around! :)
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FINALLY! Someone gave him the verbal slapping he needs!